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RedBack Commando Commander

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A New Beginning 8
by *turboman500

To be honest, I haven't read the previous seven chapters for this particular tale, so as far as the overall epic for the story goe...

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         It was a dark misty morning in the depts. of Felarya. It was chilly of from the recent fall of snow the land received the past few days. Most the worlds creatures were not out this morning, waiting for the day’s sun to rise so the remainder of the snow will met and then the land will once again become warm. There was a creature out that did not seem to take in this logic. It was a young girl, a naga in fact, with short brown hair, mismatched eyes and a short brown tail with a unique pattern to it. She wore a little ripped up shirt, and two straps in her longer strands of hair that dag
Story of the Naga Aurora
by =Kikijonson

The first thought that springs to mind once I finished reading this was "you need a good editor." Let's leave the thoughts on the ...

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Scala's Tale Part 7   
 Remmy stood before the fairy and drider, blowing away the smoke from the barrel of his gunblade.  This weapon of wood, brass and steel was used by his father and his father before him, all in the defense of the village.     
 Archon arched his back up, cracking his neck and turning around to face where the shot was fired.  He looked passed the splintered trees, smoldering and reduced to mere toothpicks, scanning with his golden eyes.  Behind him, he felt Sylph take off into the woods but he didn't care; he will take another swing at her later uninter
Scala's Tale Part 7
by =Blazbaros

All righty. The next chapter in the "young Scala" saga. Let me start off by saying that in terms of technique, this particular chapter ...

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Ryla's Felaryan Adventure - 4
by ~Mecha-GREGOLE

All right, I'm going to break it down in two forms. First, there's going to be a few of the finer points of grammar that shou...

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You think anybody would care to hear tales and the history of Gideon, the Death World that's the RedBack Commando's home? 

73%
8 deviants said Sure! Why not?
18%
2 deviants said What kind of a name is "Gideon" for a planet?
9%
1 deviant said Nah
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Ah, right then...

Mon Nov 16, 2009, 7:57 PM
  • Mood: Stumped
  • Listening to: Blood Upon the Risers
  • Reading: Dan Abnett
  • Watching: Gun Kata
  • Playing: Warhammer 40k: Dark Crusade
  • Eating: sure, why not?
  • Drinking: lots and lots of sprite
Well I'm over the "hump" of the swine flu. Feeling quite rejuvenated with just a slight cough now. But this...THIS makes no fecking ounce of sense to me.

How in the Hell can I go without eating anything for almost sixty straight hours and at the end of it all manage to GAIN ten pounds? I'm guessing someone I know out there lost the weight and I was the one to find it for them...

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  • Current Residence: The Golden State
  • Interests: I'll consider anything twice
  • Favourite movie: Apocalypse Now Redux Version. I love the smell of 45 minutes of added footage to a Vietnam classic
  • Favourite band or musician: The Trans Siberian Orchestra
  • Favourite genre of music: whatever helps me think clearly
  • Favourite artist: HR Giger
  • Favourite style of art: Hero's Journey
  • MP3 player of choice: Nano
  • Shell of choice: Carapace with RedBack Aposmatism
  • Favourite game: Chess. I'm also a fan of Go.
  • Favourite gaming platform: Sixty four squares or more
  • Favourite cartoon character: The Punisher.
  • Personal Quote: Victoria aut Mortis et Vae Victis!
  • Tools of the Trade: Rapier mind and broad wit.

Journal History

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I claim this shout box! :evillaugh:
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Mon Jun 29, 2009, 3:33 AM
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Hi hi hi there
Sat May 30, 2009, 7:11 PM
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hi
Sat May 30, 2009, 3:36 PM

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*Wild9 Oct 30, 2009, 6:44:57 AM
Thanks! Much appreciated ^^

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~JimBillSverige Oct 12, 2009, 6:43:22 AM
Thx for the fav! Gonna post a better pic on it, the finished version :)
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*Wild9 Oct 12, 2009, 6:26:58 PM
Culexus FTW. My very favorite Assassin. More versatile than most gamers give credit for =P

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Analyzing art is like dissecting a frog. Few people are interested and the frog dies of it.
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~JimBillSverige Oct 13, 2009, 5:06:50 AM
Hehe, I´ve never played with it and never against it either, but at least it was a really funny model to paint :) Hard to get the clean white look though
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~Grave-Dave Oct 7, 2009, 9:59:03 AM
Hello! thanx for the fav ;)
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~ThunderManEXE Sep 17, 2009, 11:27:46 AM
Thanks for watchin'

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=HobbitPunk Sep 16, 2009, 10:03:41 PM
Thanks for the fav!

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=MukatKiKaarn Aug 7, 2009, 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for the favorite ^^

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~braunmar Jul 24, 2009, 7:29:01 PM
thanks for the fav!!!
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